I liked this, to make it even better, you could try breaking up the poem a little, seperating lines and making short stanza's or couplets (two lines)
Otherwise, an inspirational poem about friendship and what we can see in others when they cannot,
keep it up
your friend,
Tara-Kay

I like the whole idea of the poem, frienship, this being on the darker side of stuff makes it more interesting... It may not be your style to use stanzas and all but sometimes trying something new can be amusing and somewhat enjoyable, cause youre doin something youre not used to, lol. Anyways, all in all, this is good stuff, keep it up.

I used to write in stanzas up until about last year. That's when I changed my style of writing. I just find it easier and more emotional to let everything flow out of my head without breaking it up into sections. Thank you for the compliments, and taking the time to read my poetry.