SWEET DREAMS
by Daniella Jul 30, 2011
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Our heart's is what makes us love and every time my heart skips a beat i think of it to the beat of our song... I have shared my feelings on this special day for you have taught me how to love.. I appreciate all you've done and wherever our love takes us I'll always follow through... When the stars appear at night or when the wind blows I'll think of you... And now as i rest my love I'll dream till i rise and shine feeling glad that every night your the last person i talk to and the last one on my mind... |
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13 years ago
by Paul Gondwe
I really enjoyed reading this,it has alot of emotions in it which are well expressed
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13 years ago
I agree totally with jenni ... but this piece with a bit of tidy it would be even better you have huge potential x
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13 years ago
by yogi73
Sounds like quite a journey. nice poem
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13 years ago
by Jenni
First of all I'd recommend you to not write the title in capital letters because it's actually against the rules (not trying to be a smartass). I like the simplicity of your piece yet it contains so much emotion and a deep truth, which makes this poem really meaningful. You might want to think about changing the appearance of your piece a bit because I think that the way it is right now people would not enjoy reading it as much. That does not matter as much though because it's a very heartfelt piece that had me captivated. Thanks for sharing.
