First of all I'd recommend you to not write the title in capital letters because it's actually against the rules (not trying to be a smartass). I like the simplicity of your piece yet it contains so much emotion and a deep truth, which makes this poem really meaningful. You might want to think about changing the appearance of your piece a bit because I think that the way it is right now people would not enjoy reading it as much. That does not matter as much though because it's a very heartfelt piece that had me captivated. Thanks for sharing.

Sounds like quite a journey. nice poem

I agree totally with jenni ... but this piece with a bit of tidy it would be even better you have huge potential x

I really enjoyed reading this,it has alot of emotions in it which are well expressed