Without You
by Hope Ann 27 Jul 31, 2011
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" I'm staring at the floor were i first new that you were gone.... my hearts weightless simply because its in a million pieces , scattered on my feet with the blood on the floor. Why i loved you in the first place i do not know for you were never there to mend me back together when i needed you the most , just told me it would be okay and that everything would work out...worked out it did ..for you maybe, but now i have blood to clean up and a heart to sew back together... " |
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13 years ago
by Dark Secrets
I loved this! This shows how harsh love can be. I liked the way you explained your situation and how it showed a mixture of feelings of rage, sadness and self-pity. It has depth to it and a perfect flow... The only thing I would ask you to change here is the spacing; put your poem into stanzas so that it becomes more like a poem in it's organization.
