Great poem brilliant work.

I like the flow of the poem. It has strength in its form. The way you use choppy sentences and fragments to stress how you feel adds to the beauty of the work. One can feel the confusion. one can see the hesitation on the page. we are, as readers, right beside you in this journey through the whole poem. Great job using your words to captivate and gain an affective (literary term for an emotional response- just in case someone didn't know) response from the audience.