by Innocent Fairy Aug 2, 2011
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Silk ribbons in the wind, |
I love your unique touch of these "silk ribbons" that captivate the reader in some sort of enchantment- some sort of magic. I like how you mentioned "fireflies" and how they "kiss your face", while I am still left pondering about the mystery of these ribbons in the wind. An enchanting piece- I was a bit unsure about repeating"silk ribbons" so often, because your descriptions were strong enough, it took away from the strength. |