I love your unique touch of these "silk ribbons" that captivate the reader in some sort of enchantment- some sort of magic. I like how you mentioned "fireflies" and how they "kiss your face", while I am still left pondering about the mystery of these ribbons in the wind. An enchanting piece- I was a bit unsure about repeating"silk ribbons" so often, because your descriptions were strong enough, it took away from the strength.

I also like how this is in the "life" section as well.....it could be in the nature I think too, but you showed on these ribbons form inspiration.....I think it could have been expanded a bit more for better understanding but the idea is motivational.

MaryAnne
Thanks for the entry Kristian!