Comments : Left to Drown.

  • 13 years ago

    by Gone

    A poem full of a mixture of sensation, lust, love, and deep feeling. I really like how you wrote:

    A fool am I
    For wishing to have you
    This play on words
    Shows nothing of what I've been through.

    It's like you're saying you can't put a handle on love :) Sometimes we can't stop ourselves even if it's for the best.

    All in all, great work! I enjoyed reading this.

  • 13 years ago

    by Chloe Johnson

    Thank you : )