by Joseph Boadi Aug 3, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
She had exquisite looking jewel eyes |
I like your title. To be able to sleep at will is a strange beauty. I really like your poem. |
by DirtRoadGirl
This is really good 5/5 :) |
by Dark Secrets
This tickled my senses... so cute, I thought this type of poetry was lost and could only be read in old dusty books. Loved it, and the ending was so unexpected, I was so immersed in the beautiful description of the lady that I never expected her to be any different... It also shows that first impressions don't depend only on looks, some people just have an air about them which draws us to them. |
Excellent one! 5/5 for you! |
I can relate to this. a beautiful poem and the flow was stunning. Truly amazing! |