Your Burning Soul.

by MyaEve   Aug 3, 2011


Flames, swaying and dancing upon my broken heart.
Feeding off the pain,
Leaving sorrowful embers.

Your soul blazing blue,
Nothing but a troublesome wildfire.
Taking young girls hearts,
to satisfy your own.

Flames must be put out,
To stop your endless hunger.
Hearts shall remain whole,
The thirst you have, will be quenched.

Giving thee my crestfallen heart,
to save others.
I no longer have use for it,
for you have tainted it.

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(The beat is a little off, sorry bout that.)

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  • 13 years ago

    by MyaEve

    Mmkay, thanks!
    And it was, haha. I just love that word, along with withered.(;

  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen

    Not at all, I dont mind even if you decide to use any words from my poems, although I know crestfallen was unintentional :)

  • 13 years ago

    by MyaEve

    Myryn~Thanks! I appreciate it! And I do hope I will get better! And sorry about that, I didn't know you had called Crestfallen, but I will go check it out! You don't mind me weaving into my poem, do you?

  • 13 years ago

    by XXthe mistakeXX

    Tht was goooood

  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen

    Wow, being new to this site, you are quite equipped already :)

    You have already built a good foundation when it comes to witing, in a few months/years, you'll excel in everything you write.

    Oh, btw, might as well check my poem, Crestfallen :P I can see someone has incorporated it to their poem :p cant balem you, such an interesting word :D

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