by BlueJay
Wow!! This is absolutely amazing!!! I love it!! |
by Jenni
You started this poem really well because the first two verses encourage the reader to think and makes them curious, wondering whether your poem will be the answer. |
by Brianna
Im absoulutly in love with thiss ! |
by Brianna
Im absoulutly in love with thiss ! |
by Kips2.0
You're pretty good with words. Well fashioned and good message. |
I really loved this poem and enjoyed reading it :) great flow great rhyme and wording is good :) fantastic job :) 5/5 |
by Baby Rainbow
This was really good a clever way to propose thinking for the reader. The idea of dream chasing and chasing dreams being turned into 2 different things is very good and you done well to write about this. |