Comments : Wandering Shade

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Is it a prose ? or what ? If it's a prose I can understand why the format is like that, and even if its not, i did not mind how the lines were placed.

    I love this so much, it's almost like how I myself write, I love simplicity yet depth. I love your words choice, and definitely concept cause I can relate. well done!

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by WanderingShade

    What's a prose?

  • 13 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    Wow pretty much amazing. I love the flow it has it simply rolls off the tongue and the emotion you express of giving someone your all and for them to mistreat it is very powerful. Great write.