Comments : Just my dream

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I have lately kinda related to this stanza-->
    Tossing and turning,
    waiting for the oblivion of sleep
    that's always just past my fingertips lately,
    I drift off unaware that I have
    into a world that seems so real.

    --but I loved it it was really good and written well with terrific wording :) 5/5