Excellent! This is creative, and strong and sort of unique. I really like this piece and think you have done a wonderful job with very few words.

So, when despair set in, when love is unfulfilled, emotions flows go from North to South in a Poet's mind. But, that is exactly where our inner strength matters. Those who fall, write sad poetry. Those who move on will be our inspiration against odds and failures in our life.

Hmm...appericiated !
The unstable state of mind and the inner potentials rising....made through little but quality writing..!

Wow this poem is great:)
Gd job 5/5