by Kuro Aug 5, 2011
category :
Life, society /
about society
First was the girl that smiled |
by Liliana
I really like this poem, the flow and the choice of words seems very well, great job :) |
by White Orchid
I thought this was very well written explaining the 3 different people who have entered into your life, i loved the flow in this it was perfect! Also, people are the ones who lie, but if someone truly loves the other lying will not be involved. There are people out there who do not lie to the ones they love. So please do not give up, love isn't a lie but just the people who claim to love who really don't. |