Comments : Love Is A Lie

  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I thought this was very well written explaining the 3 different people who have entered into your life, i loved the flow in this it was perfect! Also, people are the ones who lie, but if someone truly loves the other lying will not be involved. There are people out there who do not lie to the ones they love. So please do not give up, love isn't a lie but just the people who claim to love who really don't.

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    I really like this poem, the flow and the choice of words seems very well, great job :)