Comments : Can You See

  • 13 years ago

    by Isabelle

    Captain lonesome. u have captured your emotions so well in this one. very well written. i think many will be able to relate to this one. and yes it will come. if u keep a open heart. u will find love again. and that girl is going to be a very lucky girl and u a lucky man! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow... I really feel like I was ment to read this... It was really really good :) an very truthful :) loved it 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    Full of Emotions., feelings nd how you show love is simply amazing! I love it!!
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Love poems are hard, very difficult to put that extra spin one feels emotionally.
    I love the simplistic poems like this. It's real feelings not flash and glitter. Excellent piece

    Connie