Comments : Trapt...

  • 13 years ago

    by WanderingShade

    Very deep i like he concept of false love being a prison

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    These days i m reading lot of gud poetry ,,,n this is one of d best ,,,thnx fr sharing ,,

  • 13 years ago

    by Sigoney Holder

    This a very intense poem each word was powerful. What a voice.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jazzy

    Absolutely wonderful. There is nothing i would have changed.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jazzy

    Absolutely wonderful. There is nothing i would have changed.

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Very true and heart touching feelings....i really loved this piece of writing. though it was sad... deep emotions.. i can see the pain... in this poem..

  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Very beautiful depiction of breaking free of a controlling uncomfortable relationship, that you have painted here. Congratulations on your jail break! I love the expressions portrayed here.

  • 13 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    "The sun shone down on me, it warmed me to the core.
    I smile at this feeling I have never felt before.
    I love this line. It's a good feeling for us to read this type of happiness. Thanks....5/5