This was very nice! |
by Rusheena
What do you mean by downgrading? I think I know, but I want to be sure. And yeah, I'm not very fond of that line either, and I was doing exactly that. I feel that's it's my weakest line in the poem. Thanks for the feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) |
Well, in reply to your reply (I don't think it gives me the option I reply to yours) |
by Rusheena
Oh. Then you're right. The speaker is addressing her demons, but she's not doing much to overcome them. So she's giving in to self-pity and by calling them monsters, she's not taking her fight as seriously as she should. |