The title you chose definately fits to this piece and it encourages the reader to think and makes him curious wondering what he's supposed to know. Picking the line up over and over again did not get boring, I rather thought that it was quite nice and brought some structure into this piece. The structure is quite interesting in general and it's nowhere usual. Flow and rhyme are good too and the emotions in this piece are powerful and I was able to feel the sadness that you expressed with your words. Overall I think this is a good poem.

Thanks alot Jenni, I'm glad you like my poem..keep on checking I have alot of poems i would post. THANKS

Thanks alot Jenni, I'm glad you like my poem..keep on checking I have alot of poems i would post. THANKS

I love this. It has so much emotion that just flows off the page. This poem could probley be published it's so good :) 5/5 and higher there's no words to explain :)