Love this. so simple yet it gets right to the point <3 5/5 |
by anjielblue
Thanxz b-inlove87... |
by Decayed
Okay, this was so enchanting to read. I love these passionate feelings, very typical, but I don't know.. I just feel comfortable reading them :) |
by BlueJay
Personally I love it how it is, because poetry doesn't have to have punctuation or correct grammar if the author doesn't feel it is necessary for the poem to make sense. So, all in all I like how ^^^ put it, but I believe you should be just fine leaving it as is. But Oh well just an opinion. Great job |