Not much of a poem but i miss you ed happy birthday :/

by empty inside   Aug 7, 2011


There was a murder around were i live
they were looking for the murderer
they blamed it on one of my best friends
he was a bit slow and gullible but i loved him
when people found out they treated him like sh*t
told him he should be locked up he should rot in hell
i stood up for him of course i did he WAS Innocent
they told me I'm stupid he'd confessed
he confessed because they told him he would be let go if he did
but they didn't they locked him up
told him he was worthless there was no point him living in this world
so he killed himself
my best friend killed himself
weeks after the DNA testing came back
they found the real murderer
i hope there happy
R.I.P Ed
gone but never forgotten
and happy birthday,
i love you
and miss you so much

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  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Sad poem. It isn't that bad of one either.

    "he confessed because they told him he would be let go if he did
    but they didn't they locked him up
    told him he was worthless there was no point him living in this world"

    Try shortening the lines.

    "he confessed because
    they told him he would be let go if he did
    but they didn't they locked him up
    told him he was worthless
    there was no point him living in this world"

    5/5