Sad poem. It isn't that bad of one either.

"he confessed because they told him he would be let go if he did
but they didn't they locked him up
told him he was worthless there was no point him living in this world"

Try shortening the lines.

"he confessed because
they told him he would be let go if he did
but they didn't they locked him up
told him he was worthless
there was no point him living in this world"

5/5