by Liliana
This a prove that Idont regret the day I said "Hi" either, you always believed in me and I am so grateful to you for that, I love it thank you so much x :) |
Now its time to believe in your self .... :) |
by Jenni
This is a really good poem, no doubt. I think you put her characteristics in words that actually seem to fit. I do not dare to complain about something as it'd make me feel as if I complain about Liliana, though she's a nice person. Rhyme and flow were good too and your words obviously showed that you believe in her. If I wasn't captured by your words I might feel a bit jealous lol. You penned a powerful piece here. :) |
by kezza
It's about me lol |
Lol u aint portugese lol |
I not only thought this was written very well but with truth in the person you wrote about. I find her to be a very special person that I have come to care for. |
by average thoughts
Start believing in your self set your demons free |
by Angel
Aw this was really sweet. i like it. it shows that there are people out there who dont see life they way you do a 5/5 from me :) |