its tyte...i loved it... hope u can visit mine... and read "destiny"(her suicide note) ciao and thank u ... i gave it a 5 =D

That was a great poem. Very good flow and excellent wording. I enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you for sharing this brilliant piece of poetry. Keep up the good work and take care.
Kristina

this is a really good poem, i mean it, really good, it explains exactly what i feel. thanx for writing it cuz now i know i'm not the only one that feels that way.

It flowed so beautifully. VERY well written. I hope you get out of this slump tha tyou are in. Your an excellent writer, and I cant' wiat to read more of your poems very soon.

Thank you so much for your comments! :-)

Love,
Danielle

another good one who would be harsh to theses poems l8er rolo :)

b-e-a-utiful, i liked it a lot, n i think the use of the short versers was effective, great poem, n i know exactly what you are talking about, nice work, keep it up.
Ben

hey, great poem. I can relate. good job. 5/5

~no more

again.. great job!!! ur poems are so real!! that's awesome! 5/5!

This is an excellent poem, you have really captured the feeling of despair, and i can totally relate to it