This is so tender.. I like how it's simple yet very expressing.

a suggestion:

"a childhood memories".. --> eliminate the article ,"a"

:D
great one.
5/5

I'm so proud of you! :) you are growing as a poetess. Very well-done. ;)

I cannot find words to explain how impressed! I am..I nominated this, your imagination here AND creativity is above measure!

I loved and enjoyed each single word, the title is very catchy! The wording is amazing and the flow and just everything is perfect here!

nominated
5/5

Now that is what i would refer to as a FANTASTIC piece of work, the warmth and love just exude from your writing, it made me smile like a cheshire cat.....Well done it's such a good piece, if i could nominate it i would a hundred times over.......just in case i haven't made it clear.......i love it :-)

I could picture the whole setting ... beautifully written ... it also reminds me of memorys as a child really good piece

This took me places. Back in time, to my grandmothers.
Poems don't usualy take me there, it was new. Very touching and soft. Just overall warm in feel.
It felt loving to me

5/5
**brii.

I think this is the most vivid poem I have read of your thus far. You linger on the details just enough to make it interesting and keep it moving along. It leaves me with nice warm feelings of home. good job!