Comments : Secret Desire

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    Makes me wonder what the secret is. ^_^
    really good

    My Favorite lines : ( I just placed them randomly)

    I have a feeling inside my gut.
    But I have no one to turn to
    It's a secret I hold to myself
    From down deep inside my soul
    I think I'll wait
    Till the end of the month
    it might bring me closer to you
    I secretly desire
    To share it with you
    More wisdom I will behold
    And my heart will always stay true. <3

    Suggestion:
    But have know one to turn to.

    But have [no] one to turn to or
    But [I ] have [ no ] one to turn to