A lonely Soul...I read this...and Ya...its interesting...the way you wrote it as a love poem is truly appreciable..... |
by Jenni
I like the depth this poem reached and each verse underlined the message really well. The rhetorical question reminds the reader that the answer is quite obvious already. I do not think that the examples and comparisons were overused or cliche. I think you chose a structure that fit to the content. Overall this is a powerful poem with a strong meaning. |
Your poetry is so down to earth, each one tells a story of life, be it sad or happy. I enjoy how you did the format, and the theme was excellent. |
Great Work and How True!!! |
Wow this poem is fantasico :) :) very great that every lil bit was my utmost favorite I enjoyed reading it and absolutely love love loved it :) :) 5/5 |
by Meena Krish
How true each word is. We can't have one |
by BlueJay
This piece is amazing. I really don't know what to say about it, though. I mean I love this piece, but I... I guess I am speechless. I guess you are just that good. |
by L
Can one exist without the other? |