Pessimism

You said so much in these lines.

At the first thought, I thought you were going to finish the poem with you leaving a suicidal note :p

LOL - I would've loved that. :P haha

GREAT INDEEd

This was incredible, I personally don't know what to say because it was so filled with someone that is obviously holding your heart, and so much uncertainty is clouding over. But there's always hope- don't let go of your faith in this soul and although I can't talk as I'm still very young and naive, keep following what your heart is telling you to do as Temps says.

A beautifully written, pure piece that makes my heart yearn.

God bless dear!
MaryAnne

Aw I personally wouldn't let go of something so beautiful. I'm sure it's just a little phase, anyways. Obviously there's a bit of frustration in this piece. I know how you feel but follow your heart and hope for the best! No reason to let just yet, it's still early. ;) This was short but really I can connect on so many levels knowing your little story and all. I'm glad you've shared them with me along the way. Keep your head up.

YAY :D
I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
thissssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!

:):):):) this made my day,,you know why??
because the same thoughts I wanted to pen
but ugh I failed :P :PPP and my teacher
kicked me outttttt baghh...

Today I woke up in a state of
irrational dismay that perhaps
expects your distance to
grow farther still, beyond where
my faith can reach and what
my patience can fight for.

^^^^
after "Today" there is a comma!! hehe
i pointed out ...i pointed out! :P
and this was breathtaking nanoushhhhhh
wallah!

I may let you go!
sooner than what both my ignorance
and your arrogance thought�

^^^
omg shu hai "�"?? LOL sal7ia wle haha

in all, this will be nominated the next week, forgive me wallah i dont have much time to make my comment longer because my father wants me to take a shower and go get a.......