by XXthe mistakeXX Aug 8, 2011
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Trees make many things and they're important to just like you. they have feelings just like you do becaue they're alive. you make people happy with your smile. trees do too with what they produce. trees need care just like you they're important too. |
Thank you and that is ok i appriciate it |
by Paul Gondwe
The content was good and well presented in this poem though i suggest you capitalise the necessary letters after the full stops,its really important so that the poem flows better...hope you dont mind me criticising |