by MyaEve Aug 8, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Tears only last a lifetime, |
by MyaEve
Cynnie~I will fix it later, I have to clean my room lolz. Andd yeah that stanza is a little off, I'll fix it! |
by Saerelune
I already found the first line to be catchy because I had to think of the words "only" and "a lifetime" being put together, as they sound contradictory. Then you go on and say that pain lasts forever, and I am immediately remembered of something that's much deeper, for it must be something like an afterlife you're trying to indicate. |
Beautiful writtin short but sweet :) |
by Mostafa
Anytime Myuh : 3 |
by MyaEve
Thank you so much(: |