by UM Jun 22, 2004
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
You go through life, |
by Kristina K
Great job. You did well in writing this piece, though something might be missing. Maybe you would have to extend the poem a bit and get into more detail about reaping what you have sown. |
hey sup?!?! yeah i agree with nicole and ariel.... sumthing is missing. i dunno what it is but good poem! |
this was a good poem, but its just missing something... |
by Just Ariel
i didnt really like this 1 much but ill still look at ur others |