Thanks so much foremost for your comment Kristian on my latest poem. I appreciate it!

Your title really drew me in, the use of that emotion that is connected with the actual soul kind of takes a more serious meaning - like all this past and present is swallowing you whole.

We do wish the world was perfect, but then we wouldn't learn. God is with you and someone will come into your life that is real and will be a true comfort.

Your words were heartbreaking yet something the world does deal with.

My only suggestion would be to not add punctuation after every single line, it kind of broke the flow a bit, just my opinion though.

Keep writing poet :)
MaryAnne