Wow!! I love this!! You have done a magnificent job!!

I have to add this to my favorite, not only did I like the message but it was written with intelligence .
Connie

The world needs to wake up or what we have will soon fade away maybe slowly or maybe in a blaze of sadness. Good write.

Tis poem is truly amazing great job 5/5

It's true, environment keeps evolving and it only makes sense that human will keep evolving , too, resulting to some unavoidable environmental impacts. The message behind this piece was sent successfully while the ambiguity of the poem's ending, however, made it more complex. The simple words and perfect rhyme scheme within this piece has enabled to achieve its easy flow, which added to the tranquility of this piece.