I thought this was well written,

I have just a few things I noticed, that need a little tweaking,

In the first stanza, the last two lines didn’t feel right, as the word 'day' was used in both.
I’d suggest you change them to read
“For it is only you I have dreamt of throughout the night,
Whom I have waited for up until this day”

In the second stanza the flow was disrupted when you used lifetime, and then time at the end of the lines, just through me off a little,

Other than these minor issues, a very sweet poem, showing love and passion,

Keep writing because you have a talent.

Love always,
Tara-Kay

This was so sweet, I can't even say one thing against it. The feeling I got reading this was one of sheer delight. Love is wonderful and you penned it so well
Connie

Another romantic and sweet write Olwin! Very
nice..enjoyed the read!

Very Lovely!!!