Just a few tiny suggestions: "An" in the third stanza should be "And", "Ill" = "I'll" and "as" = "has"
You two did a good job here, especially since the feelings seem really convincing and because I cannot tell who wrote what part. The flow was good and I liked your choice of words since it fit to the content. The last stanza was my favorite because it showed the love the speaker feels for that woman.

Well these are pure feelings of love.. and there is some harmony between you two, which gives this piece some depth and vivid thoughts..

well done

Beautiful(;
I loved the rhyming, it was perfect. The only thing that kinda of messed me up was how you used her name.
I didn't think it "fitted."
But great overall!(;

Can't say much other then another one of pure talent and enjoyment.
Connie