Great write :)
I like the way you have structured this poem :)

I really like this part...
"I won't look back with gentle tears streaming down my face, I will not stop and look at the disaster I left."

In terms of fixing the poem...
"I can oly run with laughter"
oly to only
"and a that one chance"
I dont think you intended an "a"

Apart from that I found this poem a really good write!
im giving it a 5/5