Nice the last line was a hit that pulled this together

We are no good for each other, but you are the addicting song that maintains me.

very cool

I think that this poem flows really well even if it does not seem that way when looking at it. I like your detailed description because it portrays a very vivid image, and I just love being able to imagine things. The emotions are really powerful and definately captivating and the conclusion summed it all up. Well done. :)

Your touch is like seductive witchcraft.

We are no good for each other, but you are the addicting song that maintains me.

These lines constitute the entire poem. Quite a creative collage of imagination in words.