WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY....WOW!!!

im the type that get you by the fire place gett'n hyped when i lick it, put it by ya face
sippin red wine, its ya bed time
cuz yo
that wuz a wack rime

For people who don't have anything nice to say just don't say it. It's not worth it! I think this poem was good, and I'm pretty sure others did as well... Don't worry Sara people like that just don't have lives...and have nothing better to do than put other people down.
Keep writting girl =0)

Thank you all so much, it really has been great to hear all your thoughts and comments.. This poem means alot to me, and I'm thankfull for all of you that took the time to read it. If any of you ever need anything, if I can help, I will try... Take Care, Sara Mae...

Whoa, that was a great piece. Im so sorry that this happened to you. I agree with everyone that has already posted, it is very well-written, and once again sorry that this has happened.

Hey Sara.
Wow, brilliant piece. very heartfelt and filled with emotions. I am sorry you had to go through such a terrible experience. I commend you for being able to write such an awesome poem despite the pain. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of poetry. Keep up the excellent work and take care.
Regards, Kristina

This was an awesome poem,Sara! I really like how you made sure togive yourself a TINY bit of blame...since there was drink involved. (Yes, I agree he should have stopped when you said no...but this really hammers home that drink will muddle peoples judgment) GREAT POEM!

Fu!k That Biatch

GO KEVIN GO KEVIN!!!!! lol srry I just had to get that out first. I loved you rpoem. It really flows through everything. You used advanced words. It came from the heart and I could feel the emotion it put you through when I read it. I loved it. Saw no problems whatsoever. keep up the good work.
luv
shannon
GO KEVIN GO KEVIN GO KEVIN!!!!!!!!

OMG i love this poem, its great. but i have to tell you. none of it was your fault. dont let urself think that, and dont let anyone tell you it was. IT WASNT. you said no and he kept on going, its all his fault. He heard you say no, the thing is that he just didnt care, and thats his problem. You were drinking yes but that still doesnt matter, if u said no that means NO. not maybe. and alcohol in your system doesnt change the difference between right and wrong. he knew what was right and he knew he was wrong. im going to leave it at that. keep in touch and if u ever wanna talk just email me. xoxo <3 Heather.

Oh my gosh.. this poem made me cry. You did an excellent job at writing your feelings out here.. I'm so sorry about what happened..

~Grace

Great poem..
so expressive..