The Ride( Senryu)

by Cinnamonspice   Aug 13, 2011


On a horse of trust
we ride the winds of friendship
clad in forever

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  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    Short and sweet!! I love this poem. I've read it like 10 times and it means 10 diferent things.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is really excellent, the wording is just right for a short, Japanese format like this!

    well done, girl:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisitely Penned, Bravo!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    I loved how you said, "on a horse of trust". Although the relationship with the one you trust can run smoothly, it can also get quite a bit bumpy, and become questioned. Overall beautiful work, beautiful message.
    Take care

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Amazin xxx