I relate to this. heartbreak is a horrible feeling... but in the end it makes you such a stronger person! i love this, you can feel the emotion. good job:)
5/5

Heartbreak is horrible,i jus wasted a year i will never get back..thanx

I can relate dude
and i think this is an amazing write

keep it up! 5/5

I can totally relate to this.

Reminds me of my first love and the stupid heartache he brought me.

Love how emotional this is.
Amazing job (y) 5/5

I relate to this 100%. Heartbreak is the worst ever. I was left by my fiance for someone younger. Maybe they are right and it was just young love, but that doesn't change the pain I constantly fill.

Really emotional, I can feel your pain.

Hey paul,

Your first stanza says so much!

I mean it doesn't take much for someone to break our hearts but the effects of our broke heart can stay with us for many years, even into our next relationships.

Another great one from u!

x

Good flow and I love the last five lines!

Love cud reli hurt so deep but i still hoping to find my own true love....lol

It's written well ^^ one of my fav

I love this poem, so emotional..

I love this poem, so emotional..

This is good heartbreaks are hard to get over untill u meet the one that is right for

Heartache indeed is the most painful condition. Being there is no pill you can pop, no cure you can use to make it go away. Beautiful and sad..

Yup, thats the definition of heartache :( its a really painful thing to go through but you gotta remember that everyone goes through and gets through somehow. . sad write but you penned it well. i liked the style :)