Long Distance

by Paul Gondwe   Aug 13, 2011


A burning sensation in my heart
Though you are mine
A long distance keeps us apart

Hopes of seeing your face,
are shattered dreams,
covered in dark clouds above

My heart bleeds,
With every single day that passes by
My feelings are strong
I'm forever yours
Though the distance is long

In that far distance place,
you remain
Whether in snow or rain,
i will rush in a quick pace
Just to see your pretty face

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  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    Great poem, you can sense the connection and passion within the flow of the poem and i really like the last stanza

    it was just what i needed :)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Long distance relationships are really hard, especially if you have a fight because you cant be right there to make it right, and also you miss the person terribly , its hard, but you penned the emotions well that come with it, I could feel the longing in this poem, nice work

  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I really liked this...you have an unusual writing style but it works nicely :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Just amazing how u put ur words together in the poem is just amazing

    It's hard long distance relationships but if u truly love them then any thing is possible

    Great poem darl
    5/5

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  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Reminds me o fmy ex we had a really long distance relationship which lasted almost a year. If someone is willing to overcome distance to be with you then dont let thhem go.
    Your words are un-matchable
    idk how you do it
    -Angel

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