This is well written and interesting. Nice job

Thank u very much. Ur encouraging words will help me to even write better

Okay i'll simply start of with a few suggestions: I think that in the seconds stanza you should replace "crowds" with "clouds" because it'd make more sense, I'd also recommend you to exchange "am" with "I'm" and "be" with "is", it's not going to change anything about the flow but it will sound better.
You described the feeling quite well and I think that this is a heartfelt poem

Thanx Jenni,i dint even see the mistake about "crowds" instead of "clouds"...i have also made the suggested changes..i think i should not be in haste when writing my poems but edit them thoroughly.

I like this:

" In that far distance place,
you remain
Whether in snow or rain,
i will rush in a quick pace
Just to see your pretty face"

great poem.

4/5 only because
"My heart bleeds,
With every single day that passes by
My feelings are strong
I'm forever yours
Though the distance is long"

I really feel like your searching for a rhyming word. I was into the poem untill I read "though the distance is long" I think there would be more strength to the piece if you used something different.... It doesnt neccesarily have to rhyme

Long distance is hard. I did that for 4 months, we pushed through it thankfully, but it was hard. You long for that person so much in that time of absence.

Hopes of seeing your face,
are shattered dreams,
covered in dark clouds above

^^ think positive! Sometimes youre willing to do more than you think, that could include pushing through it and making it work.

Nice write!

Reminds me o fmy ex we had a really long distance relationship which lasted almost a year. If someone is willing to overcome distance to be with you then dont let thhem go.
Your words are un-matchable
idk how you do it
-Angel

Just amazing how u put ur words together in the poem is just amazing

It's hard long distance relationships but if u truly love them then any thing is possible

Great poem darl
5/5

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I really liked this...you have an unusual writing style but it works nicely :)

Long distance relationships are really hard, especially if you have a fight because you cant be right there to make it right, and also you miss the person terribly , its hard, but you penned the emotions well that come with it, I could feel the longing in this poem, nice work

Great poem, you can sense the connection and passion within the flow of the poem and i really like the last stanza

it was just what i needed :)

5/5