I'm noticing you write brilliant love poems. My favorite line was "butter mixed with cream"! Lol I favorited this poem just for that line!

Only 1 comment? This is very nice. Like all the feelings we have for someone wrapped up in a couple simple lines. Really just gets the message through. Good work.

I like this alot:)

This is heart touching and very sweet to the hush ears. Love conveyed in simple beautiful words. Your gift of using words that deeply stays within ones thought even after reading is very amazing. Write on, God be with you always. Cheers!

You are elegant with your love poems, would definitely make a girl blush.