Very passionate. Your words are poetry in it's true form. Very well done.

Nice, nice.

Favorite part:
"Sweet as ice cream
Funny as Chaplin
Indeed a queen
Dress to impress
Talk to express"

Thought i don't know who chaplin is.

Charlie chaplin..he was the greatest comedian throughout the 30's

This is most definitely an idea that I love: to sail to a foreign land with the woman you love because she is like royalty. I'd like more scene, though, and less exposition. Show me that she's beautiful, don't just tell me. Let me feel like I want to sail away with her. I want to feel connected to this poem.

This is a great start to something with vast potential.

Loved the way this poem flowed, it was such a beautiful poem.