Hoping

Hello Paul. Hope you find that girl.

I love the last line of this poem. :) I donno why, but it just speaks volumes to me. <3 5/5

Paul,

What a wonderful poem

Am hoping to find my missing rib
A girl with a high class
White dazzling eyes
Sweet big lips
^^^
Talking about a missing rib, even though you have not yet met this person, they're already a part of you, of who you are

Let it be exotic, foreign or even forbidden land
^^^
You will go to the ends of the earth if need be to find your true love

An amazing write

x

Wow nice lovely poem I loved it very good an awesome read great job :) 5/5

I really liked the missing rib part, it is a great metaphor that I have never heard before. Very original