Grace and Beauty

by Cinnamonspice   Aug 13, 2011


Pink cherry blossoms
held in the winds gentle hands
fall silently down
natures gossamer petals
grace our vision with beauty

If my syllable count is right this is a tanka
5/7/5/7/7

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  • 13 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    I see in your verse a painting full of motion. Natures playfullness is definitely quite enchanting. Absolutely beautiful :)
    Take care

  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    I must say the choice of words on this exquisite flower with delicate (gossamer) petals, one of nature's mysterious beauties whose flowers suddenly wilts and falls was a pleasure to read. I would have used it as a beutiful opening or closing of a poem to metaphorically describe a beautiful woman's face/feelings suddenly saddened by a loss (such as a lover's). Lovely short poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Thats was pure grace and beauty :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    Wow.. I love this vivid image. So refreshing to read nature poems..

    I laughed at your comment :p

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