Wow, love love love this :) just wanting to be a girls everything and more.
good job(:

5/5

Thanx holly

Incredible 5/5

Very good poem, I can relate to it very well. The only suggestion I have is that maybe you should take out some of the I's, there are a lot of them. Other then that I truly enjoyed reading the poem.

5/5

Great job! I love this piece, though I agree with the above, I would suggest you to remove some of the I's.

I can feel the need and want in your voice through the poem, beautifully writen. Awesome job! (:

Thanx Nicole

To Rose Budding and Dreamer: i have removed some of the "I"s as you suggested..thanx for the advice

So Amazing, I Wish I Could Find A Guy Who Would Write Something Like This For ME.. Haha. But IT Will Never Happen, I Guess. Relationships Are A Waste OF Time To Me. But GREAT BEAUTIFUL Poem:)
-Jessi.
Oh And Thanks For The Comments!:)

Damn, this poem is good :)

Wish a guy could write me something as deep and heartfelt like this.

Keep up the awesome work 5/5

Perfect

I loved it soo sweet
5/5 from me sweetie <3333