by Tyler Holland Aug 13, 2011
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I know I messed up and I wasn't very smart |
by Courtney
Thats really good, good make it longer though but its a good short poem :) xox |
Ummm...Thanks... I think. |
by Jenni
Do not mind me criticizing your work. I think that this poem is a bit short and that the first two verses do not fit to the flow you continue with, not trying to be mean. |
Wow your better then i am XD |