Comments : I Messed Up

  • 13 years ago

    by Bethany Smith

    Wow your better then i am XD

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    Do not mind me criticizing your work. I think that this poem is a bit short and that the first two verses do not fit to the flow you continue with, not trying to be mean.
    Enough with the "negatives" though. Your rhymes are good and those few verses show that you obviously regret what happened and that this person means a lot to you. I like the fact that you started this poem by "blaming yourself for what happened" (that sounds weird) because it underlines the message of this poem, your apology.

  • 13 years ago

    by Tyler Holland

    Ummm...Thanks... I think.

  • 13 years ago

    by Courtney

    Thats really good, good make it longer though but its a good short poem :) xox